George McGavin
United Kingdom, Scotland, Aberdeen

Words:	42
Access:	Public
Comments:	13

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Poetical Hearts

Rich and liturgical traditions scattered widely

beyond distinct people, reflect life

through beauty and desires

written concisely from

aching, yearning

hearts.

Hearts

yearning, aching

from concisely written

desires and beauty through

life, reflect people distinct beyond

widely scattered traditions liturgical and rich.

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Comment by: lyrically yours - 2007-10-05 09:19

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Short, sweet and to the point, very nice

Comment by: sudipal - 2007-04-22 14:17

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Wow. I like the shape-poetry and the symmetry.

Comment by: xxsasha1xx - 2007-04-14 09:51

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This was a great read and I like the visual appeal of the looking glass structure. It came together nicely.Great job.

Comment by: - 2007-03-01 08:23

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I agree with Marilynn, looks very impressive. It must have taken some time to think about.

Comment by: Marilynn76 - 2007-02-17 16:58

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Wow, that's impressive. Must have taken awhile to figure out how to do that!

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