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RoadLessTraveled
Road LessTravelled
United States, CA

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A Higher World

The air is beautiful above the clouds
It's like I never breathed before now
And the world is beautiful from up so far
Rising on the tail of a shooting star

I throw my head back, now forgiven
Not even angels know this side of heaven
I fling my dreams into the sky
They fall back down from on high

I lift my arms up, finally free
How could a world like this exist without me?
I laugh aloud into the blue
The clouds drop in behind you

And the air is beautiful above the clouds
It's like I never breathed before now
And the world is beautiful from up so far
Rising on the tail of a shooting star

I'm finally, finally free,
Nothing in the world can stop me
Forget the worries of this world,
Just say goodbye...

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peppercornrent Comment by: peppercornrent - 2006-11-03 09:16
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Kris,

Nice imagery, 'Not even angels know this side of heaven' is a teriffic line.

I'm looking foward to reading more.
simowierdo Comment by: simowierdo - 2006-10-07 11:00
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i liked how you expressed your love to be in the sky and i especially liked the line " rising on the tail of a shooting star" nice imagery. thanks for the read
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