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RoadLessTraveled
Road LessTravelled
United States, CA

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All Alonely

Sitting with the lights off
The emptiness is beautiful
The dusty blinds can't hold the sun
And the room is bathed in blue
The carpet stares back blankly
At unmatched stools and chairs
And in the perfect, sacred quiet,
I'm the only one who's there

I'm all alonely
And I think that I don't mind
The feeling's melancholy
And yet, one of a kind
I'm all alonely
And though it's made me cry
I've spent my life alonely
And that's the way I'll die

Wrapped in a blanket on the couch
So perfectly at peace
I marvel in the emptiness
At it's mismatched sanctity
Settling in, I close my eyes
The feeling feels like home
So comforting, familiar,
Is being all alone

I'm all alonely
And I think that I don't mind
The feeling's melancholy
And yet, one of a kind
I'm all alonely
And though it's made me cry
I've spent my life alonely
And that's the way I'll die.

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rljcooper Comment by: rljcooper - 2008-07-15 17:08
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A verry good peace if work.
JPM Comment by: JPM - 2006-11-04 00:29
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Thank you for a good poem,Good write and good choice of words.
InHizImage Comment by: InHizImage - 2006-10-04 06:46
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First stanza- "I'm the only one who'd there"? did you mean "who's"?

Second- "alonely" - "alone" or "lonely"?

This is a good twist on loneliness. Most people label it a bad thing but you've pointed out the positive in it here. Good write.
Yvylyn
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