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The Great One 99
Michael Dervos
Canada, quebec, laval

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Math!

Three plus one minus one equals three
I did it! I did it! I did it! Yipee!
Four plus three plus one equals eight
You did it! You did it! You did it! Thats great!
Five plus one plus one equals eleven
No thats not right it equals to seven!
Keep it up you're doing well in math
If you dont, you'll fear my wrath!
Its time for recess go out and play
Thank you so much you've helped me a lot and I bid you good day

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JohnnySodoff Comment by: JohnnySodoff - 2006-10-04 15:49
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Fun math poem. I always hated math as a kid (I still do actually.) Maybe if I had poems like this as a kid I would know how to find the circumference of a circle.
InHizImage Comment by: InHizImage - 2006-10-04 13:19
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You seem to have the hiccups *winks*

I'd break up the last line to read:
"Thank you so much, I must say
You've helped me a lot
and I bid you good day." It would read smoother.

Cute and welcome to Spoiled Ink ~ Yvylyn
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