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kosfrans16
Francis Planta
Philippines, Bacolod City

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Should I Give In?

It wasn't because you held me tight
That I fell in love with you
It wasn't because of your warm embrace
That helped start anew
It was only when I realized
I'm falling further everyday
It was only when you came close to me
And kissed my tears away
My heart sometimes I feel
It's being torn in two
And when I think of it
there's nothing I can do
I tried to make to make it right for us
but it didn't seem to help
I tried to get close to you but
More and more my heart felt
I love you still as time will allow
So much things I wanted somehow
But I think its time for me
to give up now

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