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| i agree...i sense hostility as well......very good composition..... |
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Comment by: sudipal - 2007-02-25 17:58
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I'm sensing a lot of hostility...
Nice poem. |
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Comment by: Anne - 2007-02-24 14:51
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| Great write . Wonderful!!!!!!!! really loved it "revenge" |
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| Very much a dont mess poem! i liked it, using a different medium for venting the pain and anger. Different - and different is great in my book. |
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I liked the unconvensional approach to this short write. It is very raw, and expressive. I liked the expression of conflict that was immediately portrayed. The narator's feelings come across loud and clear.
great write,
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