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Whispers of truth
All of the pain you feel is real.
let no one tell you otherwise.
it is ok to feel sad, mad, or evemn depressed.
it is not bad to grive over a loved one.
some peole are stupid.
some people dont care.
but the love you have will last.
the world is a terible place
there is pain, hurt, and trouble.
anywhere you look, people are stupid.
they cause pain and hurt.
lead the life you want.
stop the pain and the hurt.
people dont care.
dont hide the sadness that you feel,
because all of the pain you feel is real.
some people are stupid.
most are.
dont let them affect you.
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I have couple of your poems, there are a lot of pain in them I guess coming from some harsh life experiences in the past. But I like them, they are real, and it is good to be able to face the reality.
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| Of the first three posted on your page, this is my favorite. I identify (or used to at least) to the emotions and feelings that you write about. Stop over at my page and check out the poem "Pain" I think you might like it. Keep up the great work! |
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| yeah sorry about that i will fix it |
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| Did you mean trouble instead of troble? Great writting and use of emotion! |
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This seems like a very free free write. It seems off the top of your head. I appreciate the emotional expression. Though it may need to be gone over with in another draft to reach its full potential as a literary write, in my opinion only of course.
great emotional unleashing.
thanks for the read,
MM |
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