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Comment by: jkaber - 2006-10-16 15:45
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Very good! You really caught me on this one! I wondered what you were doing in front of the fire with two women! Only one little nit:
We'll leave behind these true romantics we so incense.
Who are the "true romantics" you refer to???
Clever poem! |
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Comment by: - 2006-10-14 04:33
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Ha got me.
I believed it to be a haughtingly beutful love poem.
A wonderful peice of work here Gavin. I enjoyed the read. |
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Comment by: - 2006-10-10 19:36
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I agree that this is very romantic. When I read this last line I laughed at your trick. It is very good, Gavin. Thank you for this poem and smile.
Enrique |
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Comment by: - 2006-10-10 16:34
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| I thought it was so romantic till the punchline then I found it priceless!...GREAT JOB! -Leah |
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Comment by: Teri - 2006-10-10 14:29
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lol I love the last line, Gavin! Ha! I don't think I've ever seen "Oxford Dictionary" in a poem before. Great inclusion. A few corrections:
in front (two words)
She and I will cease
pretense
Great poem and as Louis says, great metaphor. Glad to see something new from you, too! T. xox |
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