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ShatteredDreamer
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United Kingdom

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Undecided (Poetry...or Just Words)

Sheaf of paper,
Cobweb of thought,
Painfully gathered,
Hand on cheek,
Watching memories pass by,
For the strength
(to be strong)
For the strength
(to carry on)
Silent windowsill,
Dented with time,
Opens up to rememberance,
Undecided,
Ask myself,
What am I doing?
(What is this?)
Are my words
My words,
Just words
Or more?
Driven crazy by the silence,
Sinking fast
(But no one grabs me)
Undecided
Is this mess poetry...or (just) words?

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fallenangel Comment by: fallenangel - 2006-11-29 13:44
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it definatly is 100% beautiful poetry, no other words could describe it.
ShatteredDreamer Comment by: ShatteredDreamer - 2006-10-27 01:15
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=D
Hey, thanks!
Comment by: - 2006-10-26 18:40
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To answer the question in the last line: I believe it's pure poetry; for this is how the genuis of it all works! :)
Take Coleridge's Kubla Khan as an example; albeit the man was high on opium then. But the point is not the opium; it's the poetic essence in itself that is a beautiful mystery!

So great job! :) *thumbs up*
jjsmith Comment by: jjsmith - 2006-10-22 05:31
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yes
there is sure to be
lots of money in this
ShatteredDreamer Comment by: ShatteredDreamer - 2006-10-22 05:24
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lol i'll be president .. you be treasurer ...
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