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Ken
Ken Thongudomporn
Singapore

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They Come From the Shadows.

They wait for the sandmen to do their work,
Then from abandoned churches, they emerge;

At night when our young ones sleep, in their beds,
When our dearest beloveds, beside us rest;

With cruel-sharp knives of coldest steel,
In front of their blood gods, they pray and kneel;

It'll only be one night, their crimson oath,
To take our women, children, maybe both;

And when they're ready, we'll see the light,
That there is no use to cower in fright.

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briana Comment by: briana - 2007-11-04 21:14
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I loved it. You should add more.
GreenIce Comment by: GreenIce - 2007-10-16 22:42
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Love this poem... "there is no use to cower in fright".. I love it... thank you
PazAmora Comment by: PazAmora - 2007-07-29 14:36
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A tease. Definately a tease. It can take shape in different ways...a story leaving deep imprints in those who read it or perhaps exactly what it is...the beginning of an end that the reader can come up with. Much respect, Paz
Audiogeist Comment by: Audiogeist - 2007-03-30 08:50
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Ooh, i wanted this poem to carry on, i loved the way it flowed. More!
Sankylady20 Comment by: Sankylady20 - 2007-02-02 20:46
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I really enjoyed it, I like the way you think. ~ Sarah
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