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Bbounty1
Scott Waugh
United States, Oklahoma, B... Fu..

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Tulsa Blues

Liven north, Apache -n-Pine,
Drive a truck, to make my dime.
Spend my time, in the local bar,
Yeah, just me n this here guitar...
and I'm liven, yes I'm liven,
the Tulsa Blues.

Ain't got no one, to call my own.
I sit n wait by the telephone.
Without a woman this house ain't a home,
leaves me cryin in bed all alone...
and I'm a liven, yeah I'm a liven,
the Tulsa Blues.

Well, life's just a gamble, a throw of the dice.
The stakes are high and ya never win twice.
Even Oral Roberts will tell you so....
the Tulsa Blues will save your soul,
and I'm a liven, yes I'm liven,
the Tulsa Blues.

Well I'm a mean old dog, out on the prowl.
six foot three n a permanent scowl.
A snorten whiskey all over town,
and kicken shit keeps my boots looken brown,
and I'm a liven, yeah I'm a liven,
yeah I'm a liven, a whole lot a liven,
the Tulsa Blues.......

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adarkvision Comment by: adarkvision - 2006-12-09 09:54
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Damn this is good!! It's brutally honest without looking back. I admire that alot. By the way I'm lovin' the title!! Good job!
Bernadette Comment by: Bernadette - 2006-10-17 02:43
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I'd love to hear this to music......and yet I almost feel as though I can. Love the notion of the shoeshine.
mom Comment by: mom - 2006-10-15 15:17
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Scott you should be recording your own music. Dont wait for other people to do it for you. I think your work is great.
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