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Comment by: lflwriter Online- 2008-07-20 14:19
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| There is no such thing as freedom or liberty in the broad sense. Study enough history and discover the truth. History is riddled with tyrants. Most of these tyrants didn’t start out this way. They promised freedom and liberty but in the end seldom if ever deliver once they put the crown on. Individuals define what freedom an liberty mean on a one by one basis. Some of these individuals strike out to destroy everything that doesn't match their definition. |
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Comment by: Walker - 2008-04-07 04:59
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The poem is interesting beacuse of the metapfors used by the poet, which strikes one, which makes him read.
I loved
"where dimples
consumed by hostile
kisses mutate"
and
"where random quests
for limitless latitude
cage some, maim others
kill everyone"
The second one is so true, and so beautifully/mercilessly expressed.
I look afer to more of you |
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This spoke to me in a very deep way. These lines especially caught my eye:
"where supermen run
into blind bullets
and professors darkness
of their bottomless knowledge
where random quests
for limitless latitude
cage some, maim others
kill everyone"
I love the alliteration and the imagery. This piece is beautiful and thank you for sharing it. |
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Comment by: - 2007-12-27 19:24
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| Powerful message in few words. Blessings to you. |
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| Interesting and too close to reality it was nicely written awsome brother insha-allah, Allah may give you the oppurtunity to write more pieces like this on e for this was an amazing read |
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