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umaisha
Sumaila Umaisha
Nigeria, Kaduna

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Dead End

He strains against
the burden of his name
strangulating his shadow

heaves and bolts
down the street
cutting corners, gutters'¦

the endless street
ends in a few
giant steps

turns out
a mere clearing
in a crowd

his future becomes
the past reversed
and shadow

nowhere anywhere
nowhere to hide
his faeces.

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LadyEgyptia Comment by: LadyEgyptia - 2006-10-16 08:17
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Another powerful write - a clear struggle but a little confusing. Is that a typo in the last word? Do you mean "faces" or "feces" - could change the meaning entirely depending on which it is. However, I like this very much.
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