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| Blood red innuendo - a lot of emotion and harsh imagery in that phrase. I don't know if the poem is simply about imagery, creating tactile feelings, but I don't understand it - and if that is the point of the "enigma" - being confused about the poem itself - maybe there is a way to make tha more clear (as oddly opposed to perhaps the point of the poem that may sound)...thanks - Erin |
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| For me this poem creates a pessimistic mood, it is sad, but powerful. |
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Comment by: - 2006-11-09 18:45
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| "Texture becomes student" for some reason.... I REALLY liked that line. The poem itself was very good, reminds me of the randomness-but-some-what-understandable type of writing I have. |
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I also have no idea what this is about. But I like it.
The staccato rhythm gives me an uneasy feel & the confusing images are wonderfully detailed ending in the final four lines, which feel like some kind of resolution.
Maybe I'm just not deep enough... |
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This is superb. It's really powerful, creating so many images in the mind and the rhythms create a mood to flow on as well.
I have no clue what this is about, but it seems like it is highly accessible for a multitude of different possibilities. Any enigma in someone's mind can be connected to this poem. I first connected it to that of your profile picture of the whales. Either way, I really love this poem! |
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