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VB 16
Vinay Benjamin
Bahrain, Manama, Manama

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One Word Song

"Papa?" she sang over the lines,
Tremulously vibrant,
A word summoned all tenderness,
Obeisant time stood circumspect.
That hallowed moment enchanted.
Flushed me with gentleness,
Reversed kaleidoscope of years brought back,
An intact image, vibrantly real.

Perched on my shoulder, as a toddler,
She'd crooned, an ecstatic bird,
Hummed tunes of love, in my ear,
That bubbling joy helped her rehearse.
A young woman now, she's retained,
Magical timbre of this unique address,
An endearment, ever so softly expressed,
Raises goose pimples of sentiment!

If a papa of this world is deeply moved,
On hearing his beloved child,
Far greater is the papa of universes moved,
When men implore, "abba " in earnest voice.
Every song need not rely on lyrics,
Or musical score to truly delight,
For solace to touch the depths of the soul,
One word songs, can often suffice!

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abhinaw Comment by: abhinaw - 2007-11-07 04:55
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Veil of Maya they say to filial love you invoke but it really touches me.I would never turn to a saint. you entice me.
VB 16 Comment by: VB 16 - 2006-10-26 03:00
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Darra - thank you for your encouraging words. I value it and hope to have your opinion on some of the other stuff I've posted here.
LadyEgyptia Comment by: LadyEgyptia - 2006-10-22 08:49
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Just simply amazing in its scope of love and humanity and understanding of the basic love between parent and child. Lovely work!
mitra Comment by: mitra - 2006-10-18 21:59
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Gorgeous poem. So much love. The contrast and examination of the earthly father and the heavenly father is great. Nice title.
Comment by: - 2006-10-18 07:32
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This is beautiful. Our names are songs when we hear them said with love...clear and pure...true love. You displayed that message perfectly and also acknowledged how wonderful it is to speak the love of our "God" whatever we call him in adoration. Wonderful poem. -Leah
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