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Audacity
A fevered smile
Under warranty to keep the
Deep, garbage filled lots
And the secrets they hide
Close, sacred
In the smog
Tides, you remain polished,
You sun-god of the modern world
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| Laura, while this poem is indeed short and sweet, it also holds an air of mystery. At least that's how I read it. Well written. :) --Robert Barlow |
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Comment by: - 2006-11-02 08:17
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| i like that...that could be expanded real easy and be very sweet...nice and short and to the point. |
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"Strawberry Mansion: A Philadelphia Story"
Set in a small section of North Philadelphia, in the spring of 1996, Strawberry Mansion depicts three teenage girls’, Tabitha, Lisa, and Shanice; struggle to rise above domestic violence, incest, and promiscuity, on their journey to become successful young women
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