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VB 16
Vinay Benjamin
Bahrain, Manama, Manama

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The Kiss

Lips juxtaposed,
Locked in ecstasy, kiss-
Demanding urgency in embrace
Entwined bodies, sharing intimacy
Pleasurable ignorance
Entertaining harmony and grace
And innocence
Merging visibly
Soul to soul

-Reveal-

Soul to soul
Visibly merging
Innocence and grace and harmony
Entertaining ignorance pleasurable
Intimacy sharing, bodies entwined
Embrace in urgency demanding kiss
Ecstasy in locked
Juxtaposed lips

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VB 16 Comment by: VB 16 - 2007-01-25 11:51
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Theresa - glad you liked it. I love to dabble in "difference" and this verse was experimental in writing mirrored verse. Thank you for your very kind compliment.
tigeray Comment by: tigeray - 2007-01-25 09:47
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Very nice form here. I like the way you have organized the poem yet still maintain nice imagery and flow. Beautiful and sensual without being too graphic!
Blessings-TGR
VB 16 Comment by: VB 16 - 2006-12-22 22:57
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Matt,
Very simply thank you. I'm experimenting with this form of writing and enjoy sharing it.

LOL

Vinay
mattlubin Comment by: mattlubin - 2006-12-22 19:38
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Cool form. I really like the line: "Pleasurable ignorance"
VB 16 Comment by: VB 16 - 2006-10-26 03:04
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Michelle - thank you. Keeps me thinking about what subject to write on next. Life is such a surprise and sometimes the most accepted gestures seen from a different perspective add their own charm.
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