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maggie m
maggie mcgill
United States, mo., st.joe.

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"Shannon"

Between "what's real" and "what might be true"
(where only a trickle of light filters through)
It's hard to tell whether I'm dreaming or not,
My senses betray all my rational thought.

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deathbyacid Comment by: deathbyacid - 2006-12-16 15:01
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yer b.b. is right... nice work with little words...
OriginalRisky1 Comment by: OriginalRisky1 - 2006-10-24 09:11
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That was a great iambic couplet. One often forgets that it is possible use rhyme and not have it fail. Good Stuff!!

Tucker
maggie m Comment by: maggie m - 2006-10-18 17:38
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Glad you liked it:)
adeepersilence Comment by: adeepersilence - 2006-10-18 15:05
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I really like this a lot, after reading it I drifted off into my mind for a bit, came back and was like, "woah!" Very well done.

The End.
Comment by: - 2006-10-18 11:47
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I liked this a lot. Clean, flows well, makes me think. Very enjoyable than you for sharing it with us.
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