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fiveringsstudent
Colin Ellis
United States, MO, Kirksville

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Falling
Memories fading
Mist rises with the morning
Open eyes watch
The daylight new
And close again
In denial

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laffarsmith Comment by: laffarsmith - 2007-07-11 22:59
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Short and sweet. Touching peice. A different title could really make this poem something truly beautiful.
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