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Archana Borhade
India, Maharashtra, Pune 411007

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Being me

Sanity and reasoning are way too dull for me
Let the learned have them
Rhythm and harmony are too methodical for me
Let the composers make them

Logic and interpretation are tedious to me
Let the scholars do them
Tranquility and perseverance are difficult for me
Let the sages master them

Give me the impulse of the moment, the insanity of love
The random tunes of the wind, the berserk pattern of the clouds
The noise of my thoughts, the ephemeral joys and sorrows
And let me live with them.

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easywriter58 Comment by: easywriter58 - 2008-04-14 18:48
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Spontanious moments keep from building up stress. I totally agree; who wants those burdens if they have the choice?

Excellent idea behind your poem.
DickGentile Comment by: DickGentile - 2008-01-25 17:32
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Those who remain children will grow in contempt of their age.
mitra Comment by: mitra - 2007-06-15 00:04
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Its so refreshing to read something like this. Great job!
zepol Comment by: zepol - 2007-05-17 22:18
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Archana, the last stanza pulled it together nicely. The first line of the last stanza did it. Very passionate and very much appreciated. good read.
xxsasha1xx Comment by: xxsasha1xx - 2007-04-16 15:24
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I like the overall flow of your poem,its honest and real.I love how you point out traits and name the ppl associated with such traits. I enjoyed this, by all means dear keep being you.Sasha
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