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H to O
Here.
Sunlight glitter scattered
on the water.
Solar confetti strewn
across the lake.
That's how You shine.
The way fresh snow glistens.
The water reflection painted on my wall.
Liquid Light Art.
A grey day, then,
There's You.
A ray of sunshine
wrapped in raindrops...(that's what I think.)
But when I try to separate
the elements from you,
I find only You.
You are the Light, the water
and the reflection.
Even more!
So, what am I?
Your friend?
Your witness.
Only this...
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| i am a rainbow, spreding love and turture onto my writings... oh i must say i love this poem...yaya |
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| Thanx Jeremy...Stay Cool:) |
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| Just to repeat what I said in the Chat room, I really like this poem. |
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| Thank you,Tad :) |
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Comment by: - 2006-10-24 12:11
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| i really like that poem..lovely images, nice melding of light and water elements...would be easy to frame it..thanks for posting... |
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