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dmralte
Dini Muana
Viet Nam, Vietnam, Ho Chi Minh City

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I Beg of Thee

Sitting, staring; alone again.
In this illuminated, hollow den.
Can't find the words to express,
this feeling of utter...loneliness.
Don't know for sure, what I want;
Myself;
I blame,
I curse,
I taunt.
This halved side of me, halfway sore,
can't get the warmth to the core.
The other remains in relunctant pleasure,
the joy; too far, too short to measure.
People come, but people go,
any word, they lack to show.
Their seconds are giants to my hour,
my lust for comfort, they devour.
Showering emotion, for them's a task;
a handful of it.......
is all I ask.

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Dakota Comment by: Dakota - 2007-12-04 03:43
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'Their seconds are giants to my hour'...
'Showering emotion, for them's a task;
a handful of it.......is all I ask'.

Billions of us - and yet so many are lonely
In need of a kind word, a soft touch
A parcel of time...
You express it in a new way for me
Get me to look again... Thank you.
dicomposition Comment by: dicomposition - 2006-10-21 05:02
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I like the rythm of the poem specially in
"Myself;
I blame,
I curse,
I taunt."
is almost like spitting with anger.
and the use of "s" not necesarily creating a calm mood but a stressed one.i like it
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