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OriginalRisky1
Tucker White
United States, Washington

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Bodies tangled at angles in sheets

Hair disarrayed styled by sleep

Morning hunger mounts scaled in inches

All in a dark box

Lightless list-less satin gathering

I reach out for more of you

Finding at arms throw away

Welcome wanton invitations

Disrobed and disregarding prim of proper

Just words lost to single desire

Recanting all earlier words of hurt for

Pain of a cleaner purity

Washed in wedded rites yet'¦

Here and now we are

We and our touches

Singing nervous tremulous turgid

Wantful itches to be scratched

Racked with inquisitorial machinations

Seeking confessions told by bodies

Outside the lies of language

The first the last miracle is

We are still in this and

At these games of delight

Whoa!! Wow!!

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OriginalRisky1 Comment by: OriginalRisky1 - 2006-10-24 08:59
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Thank you Maggie, how does one elevate the purely physical? Perhaps it is easier when it is not just physical and extends into that realm where we "Know" the act of love can be a miracle.

Tucker
maggie m Comment by: maggie m - 2006-10-23 08:37
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Eye-opening...Brilliant! Thank you for sharing an often unspoken view.
Good Job! Stay True:)
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