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tathas
Joseph Hurley
United States, TX, Conroe

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All I ever had

There's a little bit of darkness
And a little bit of light
In this strangest of dreams
In which I live tonight

I am the shadow
Extending my hand in a plea
Please, can't you help
To take this darkness from me

Just a word, just a look
Just a soft and meaningful glance
To shine a small glimmer
Of the hope of a chance

Whisper those words
That sing so sweetly
Please say them soon
Before my own darkness swallows me completely

So I stand in the corner
Of my own imaginary vision
Trying to break free
Of the heavy weight of indecision

I need a beacon
A quiet, simple thing
A few lovely words
That will let my heart forever take wing

See who I am
All the good and the bad
Take these words from me
In truth, they're all I ever had

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mitra Comment by: mitra - 2007-03-08 03:07
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Simple words does go a long way! Good write.
maggie m Comment by: maggie m - 2006-10-27 21:29
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:( Great Poem...and I know what you mean.Thank You
Maggie
ShatteredDreamer Comment by: ShatteredDreamer - 2006-10-27 13:28
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Simple language and it really flowed when I was reading it - nicely done!
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