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ShatteredDreamer
Tash .
United Kingdom

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Kicking and Screaming

You can cut me cloth with bloodied daggers,
You can smother my voice with dirt,
You can lick me with the bullet from your gun,
You can rip me, ravage me
(And it still won't hurt)

It's going to be a long ride, you know?
And you can drag me right to the Gates of Hell,
But it's going to be a long, long ride,
(Feel free to drag me all the way)
Kicking and screaming blue murder
All the way inside.

Through the thorns,
You can only drag me so far, you know,
Leaving my sweet trail of blood,
(And it'll be a long, long ride)
Take me kicking and screaming, through the mud.

I've got my own knife,
I see my insane eyes glinting on the blade,
To blacken and bruise your sanity,
(Gunslinger, your bullets won't work)
Stab, Stab you right in your vanity.

See the knife which glimmers in this sunless sky?
I see you already dead,
Already see the gore at your slit throat,
(and when you're thrown away for the fish to eat)
Let's hope those bones don't float ...

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simowierdo Comment by: simowierdo - 2007-03-21 13:25
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three words popped into my mind when i read this: reckless, rebellious, and hatred. this is kind of different from your other works, it seemed like the person's suffering but wouldn't admit it, it's very tough on the surface but soft on the inside...i don't know, i think i'm just being stupid. but i love this one!
fallenangel Comment by: fallenangel - 2007-01-03 18:26
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remind me never to cross you in a bad mood!! it read incredibly well though. i don't know why but i seem to to have commented on your works more than anybody else.
alaska Comment by: alaska - 2006-12-30 21:45
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*Confession; I make an effort to not read any work written by anyone younger than me.*
Though, you write like no thirteen yr old ive read. Your similes/ metaphors and general content though maybe nascent (and not naive) and perhaps a little awkward sometimes are beyond your years. I would like to come back in 6 years time and see how far you've come. Keep on writing sister- your writing already has the one vital ingredient; personality. By the way, thanks for your comments- appreciated.
sabihah Comment by: sabihah Online- 2006-12-29 01:59
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Payback is a biatch aint it :) love the terrible darkness of this piece interesting and scary.
Tayo Comment by: Tayo - 2006-12-28 05:00
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Am a little scared at this but
its a nice job.
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