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Godsgroupie
Rosie Davis
United States, California, Santa Monica

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Forever Friend

You've always been there, my whole life through
When I was filled with happiness or skies were blue
You were always right in front to lead the way
Yet unaware of your presence, I often went astray
I'm glad I finally see you for who you are
My forever friend, my shining star
Thank you Jesus.

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Comment by: - 2007-08-11 14:18
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very beautiful and an monumental gift of words
rrbaerman Comment by: rrbaerman - 2006-10-29 15:09
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God bless you and keep writing for the Lord.
Dance6 Comment by: Dance6 - 2006-10-29 13:33
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I think this poem is really good. You were able to say what you needed with so little words.
NurddinBMoussa Comment by: NurddinBMoussa - 2006-10-29 12:20
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I am enamoured of the way you express yourself so eloquently , I implore God to guide you along the road to Success.

It is gladly aprreciated.
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