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Godsgroupie
Rosie Davis
United States, California, Santa Monica

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Shelter

A personal invitation, after all that was said and done
To return to my arms and take your place as number one
I know it's a lot to ask, but what more can I do
When my heart is in need of shelter
And all it loves is you.

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Comment by: - 2007-08-11 14:17
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very lovely
abitosunshine Comment by: abitosunshine - 2007-06-30 19:30
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Rosie, I've lived Shelter, and my advice to you is to let him go! I love that it is short & bluntly to the point!
Comment by: - 2007-05-29 21:20
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I think what you have here is only the beginning and I want to know the before story, and the after as well.
karbearkar63 Comment by: karbearkar63 - 2006-12-09 08:30
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Very nice, would like to see it with more verse.
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