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Godsgroupie
Rosie Davis
United States, California, Santa Monica

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Nothing brings on a more paralizing fear than you
My heart screams within me as I feel your approach
I can't control you and I hate you for all the pain you have caused me
The good things you bring only last a little while
Then I scramble to hold on as you pull them away
I want to embrace and accept your ways
But to many times you have left me lonely, abandoned, and longing for you
I'll die before I let you destroy me.

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MoShnep Comment by: MoShnep - 2008-09-17 15:01
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Mo to Rosie:
How do you know so much about my life? Really nice."
Comment by: - 2007-08-11 14:15
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another great write...liking your style
mootiy Comment by: mootiy - 2007-05-28 11:56
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i agree, nice poem.
xxsasha1xx Comment by: xxsasha1xx - 2007-03-09 20:05
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Sounds like the dance of love.....sometimes we know we know that person or the situation isnt good for us, but we still stay.Your last line was powerful, it was an affirmation.Nice powerful read.
xxsasha1xx Comment by: xxsasha1xx - 2007-03-09 20:05
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Sounds like the dance of love.....sometimes we know we know that person or the situation isnt good for us, but we still stay.Your last line was powerful, it was an affirmation.Nice powerful read.
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