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I want to write words
How I'm disgusted
With Myself
With You
How I hate you
How I'm apathetical about the
whole situation
How I think about it every second
of everyday
How I still love you
But never did really
How I miss you on Sunday mornings
But not really
How you're fucked up
How I'm SO FUCKING PISSED OFF
How I want you to call me
and beg for my forgiveness
How much I want to say No
But don't know
And would probably say Yes
But wouldn't
Shouldn't
and probably would
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i agree with the last comment. it totally captures the torment of any true relationship! The last 6 lines are my favorite! So very true! It's "I know better but just don't care"
"never did really" - never really did - sorta sounds better
i liked the first parts but thought the last 3 lines were WEAK compared to the rest of the piece - i don't know how to sort em - but something needs doing, otherwise, pleasant read
tom
