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russellquinn
Russell Quinn
Denmark, Copenhagen

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Julie had meant hair braids and embroidered summer dresses to the nursery school staff, tambourines and perfect pitch to the choir master, homesickness and tears to Brown Owl, a 'solid B' to Mrs. O'Kant the mathematics teacher, passion and foresight to York University's debating society, love and dedication to James, and everything to her son Julian.

Now at age 36, Julie McEscher found herself meaning only 'child killer' to most of the country.

She didn't feel like Julie anymore. Her name had been taken from her and there was no longer a way of quantifying herself or connecting to her past. It seemed unthinkable to even begin defending something without a label, so she kicked the stool away from under her feet and hung there until one was no longer needed.

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JuSTBeiNHeRSeLF Comment by: JuSTBeiNHeRSeLF - 2008-08-28 16:45
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that was way awsome you tottally had my attention very powerful great job =)
Kathryn E Comment by: Kathryn E - 2007-07-16 16:57
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I like your style and am personally fond of concise and seemingly-simple. I can't make any suggestions here. It is what it is. Very nice.
Cherley Comment by: Cherley - 2007-04-20 21:13
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I'm assuming meant is left as in "Last Will and Testament". Great story that seems complete to me. It's sad. "Child Killer" could mean that she accidently killed a child or perhaps it was her own child. This I would like to know.
Comment by: - 2007-04-18 10:28
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This is really good. I tell everyone that writes a short story this, but I think it would be really cool if you took it back a couple of chapters to explain everything that led up to her final moments.
Comment by: - 2007-02-08 03:56
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You took on a difficult task, you hooked the reader with the mundanne and then you kickedass with the finale . . . Super job . . . Conscience is sometimes our own worst enemy . . .
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