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stephissafety
Steph Castor
United States, Kansas, Baldwin City

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Al Capone Strikes Back

On these Chicago streets
A homeless man dances- every tooth in tact; in sight
Pearly whites
Wearing a diamond-crested Rolex and Armani suit,
Leaning proud against a stop sign
On the corner of Congress and Michigan.
The L train flies
As if conducted by pigeons.
Navy Pier is maintained by
Starved seagulls
Who steal candy from children
And frighten even
The veteran carnies.
Only here
Can McDonald's be
An amusement park
And have escalators
And elevators on each side of the building.
Only here
Can the House of Blues, Chicago Theater,
And Hard Rock Café
Be on the same block.
With bootleggers
Striving thespians
Pan-handling egg shakers
And the underground
Pizza parlor mafia,
The Windy City never sleeps.
The Metro screams
Gunshots and drug deals.
On the contrary,
Colleges reign every two miles.
Only here
Can you find luminous yellow taxis
Driven by rabid monkeys
Running red lights.
Only here
Can you expect turtles to emerge from sewers
Carrying swords and daggers.
These city streets reflect
On the massive silver bean
And create an illusion of chaos
Residing in the palm of my hand.

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JohnnySodoff Comment by: JohnnySodoff - 2007-01-10 13:07
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Frickin' amazing descriptions here.

Four cities I'm considering moving to: Austin, Chicago, New York, LA.

Probably one of the first two though. Anyways, I wanna be one of the people on the streets you're writing about.
Sophia Comment by: Sophia - 2006-11-10 01:05
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I love the way this paints an entire picture for the reader! Have you ever read any of Edwin Morgan's poetry? This reminds me of some of his stuff.
history Comment by: history Online- 2006-11-05 16:41
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This is great, you create a really vivid image, I love:

The L train flies
As if conducted by pigeons.

And!:

Only here
Can McDonaldâ??s be
An amusement park

I remember the days of hanging out at McDonalds with nothing better to do! And I'm English! Trust McDonalds to break down the boundaries of cross-atlantic poetry.....worrying!

Lana x
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