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Renatta
ren simon
United States, oklahoma, blanchard

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HIM

his eyes burn like the firey red inside of me
As I look into his eyes they seem to burn a hole in me
Take no heed and you might see exactly what he'll do to
ME!

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Renatta Comment by: Renatta - 2006-11-09 16:30
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i get my ideas from ..................ok well...........guys!mostly my boyfriend,Justin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!=)=(
lufkinmom Comment by: lufkinmom - 2006-11-03 14:04
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This one makes me wonder where you are getting your ideas at.
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