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Seeking
Search my heart Oh Lord
And make your answers clear
Smooth out your path for me, in this desperate time of fear.
Fear of making the wrong choice
Fear that is not of you but of myself
Tell me lord I really need your help.
I want to move forward and embrace what you have planned
But what if, i make the wrong move what then.
My child I am here, I AM YOUR LORD YOUR GOD
Fear not and just move foward and know that i am here with you,
It doesn't matter of the choice's you make if they are right or wrong
You can not lean on your own understanding, for to me you belong.
So instead of taking matters in your hands
Let things happen as i planned.
For now keep my peace and love in your heart
And my ways will be your's and clear for you to start.
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I guess it is ' yours ' instead of ' your's ', isn't it?
I'm not so sure since English is not my native language, but I think 'yours' works well.
And thank you for reading my poem. ^_^ |
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Comment by: - 2006-11-02 14:50
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| i agree with alicehtc. normally, im not so pulled in by religion-themed poems but this is an exception. nice. |
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A very meaningful one. The conversation between you and God. It is nice for encouraging the others.
'And my ways will be your ways and clear for you to start.'
What do you think if change 'your ways' into 'yours'? |
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