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Gazing at the sky
feet jumping off the ground
Wants to lift, to fly
to live and never die
She's a daydreamer
Always wants more than she can get
reaching for unreasonable things
Love, pleasure, excitement and peace
are wishes among many
May her spirit never fade
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Ah! the writings of youth....smile.....yes, may her spirit never fade as the writers spirit is obviously a tad dim. "Reaching for unreasonable things???" there is nothing unreasonable about these dreams....the only restrictions put in place are by the dreamer themselves....interesting outlook and nice write...Luv Lance:)
