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Just me
All I'll ever be
Is JUST me
Whether I change or grow
Or stay sound and slow
Should I learn something new
Or never change my view
Even if my dreams should fly
Or sink away while I cry
I can be nothing more
Nothing less
A hopeful insignificant light
Or a confused mess
I can be nothing less
Just a wisp of flame
On a candle of moments
Behind an antique frame
All I'll ever be
Is JUST me
Truth, lies, and dreams
Open, but never free.
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Comment by: - 2007-08-12 10:45
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| I have a friend that has been trying to tell me that for the last 2 years, I think I finally get it! Nice poem! |
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Comment by: - 2006-11-03 13:02
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| excellent poem, tathas. |
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| This was one of those fist-poundingly, adreneline (Gaw, can't spell it)-rushing, WHOO-DEE-DOO-ing pieces of work that you just have to love because it's got such a fantastic independent buzzy aggressive vibe -- Double thumbs up for this, really enjoyed it, ThankYe Verily for the read ! <3 |
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Comment by: mitra - 2006-11-03 09:44
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| Sweet poem. Love simple rhymes. It wasn't too revealing about yourself at the same time it was personal particularly the ending. Nice work. :) |
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Comment by: tathas - 2006-11-03 09:08
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| I'm not a maniac. Psychiatric a bit maybe, but not a maniac :) Unless you count my driving some days. But I don't, so nah nah nah. |
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