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Comment by: - 2007-03-06 07:55
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| i found that one a very emotional read. nice imagery and ending. i can't decide about the ears lifted upside line. : ) |
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| You draw great picture. There are so many well depicted emotions, so much loneliness, but also some hope. Your poem really touched me. |
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Comment by: Khema - 2006-12-06 06:35
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| thist is sweet music to my eyes :) finally i'm beginning to find others with a deep and spiritually positive style. Keep going! K~ |
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Comment by: lofty - 2006-11-09 07:08
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Unmasked I turn to an unknown
a timeless maze of rights and lefts
hoping to find the ending to one story
and the beginning of another.
pefect... |
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Comment by: dreamer - 2006-11-05 13:22
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I really like your imagery.
"I face my face and cry no tears"-- not sure that I like having two faces so close to each other.
I am glad to be reading your writing again Suzanne. I have missed your unqiue style. -- Suzie |
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