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Hollykinz
Holly Taylor
United Kingdom, Rushden, Northants

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Once upon a time...

I wasn't always like this,
Jealous and sharp,
Once I was free
To fly and fall,
Once I was happy,
And noticed the good things,
Instead of ridicule the ok,
Once my heart was flesh not glass,

And I would if you asked me to,
Pick your tears up off the cold floor
Cast them away,
And watch the glint of sadness
As the sun shines.
And if you would let me,
I would smile my warm smile,
To melt your heart back to a whole,

Once I made you cry,
And you nearly drowned in a puddle of your own tears,
I could have offered you my hand,
Helped as you screamed,
Mended your wounds,
But I didn't.
I thought you didn't need me,
Thought you didn't want me,

And I would if you asked me to,
Go back in time and change everything that was,
And maybe that would change everything that is now,
To something brighter and better,
And everything would be ok,
And I would if you let me,
Let me love you then way I did then,
The way I do now.

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michi0 Comment by: michi0 - 2007-03-03 18:40
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wow. intense and yet beautiful. keep wrting, you're great
aysmiles Comment by: aysmiles - 2007-02-13 02:28
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it is a nice and sad poem, i almost cried because i feel the deep emotions it aroused. Keep it up taylor
SkarredPoet Comment by: SkarredPoet - 2007-02-07 00:35
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Sounds like your quite the caring person..."Once my heart was flesh not glass" that line is my favorite because I feel the same way. Love changes things especially when it breaks your heart.
polo Comment by: polo - 2007-02-03 20:15
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wow very personal and i enjoyed
rustyskittle2 Comment by: rustyskittle2 - 2006-11-20 14:55
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wow. I really like this stuff. at first, it sounds like it's just another emo poem. but I really like your take on this topic, and I agree with it. we honest-to-God would help people, or say the things we know we want to say, be it just feels like they don't need us. impressive.
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