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JohnnySodoff
John D. Valadez
United States, Texas, Corpus Christi

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The Twenty-First

The neon city
steaks across the camera lens
in glitter of night
while jazz rolls from the alleys
and shoes tap beats through footsteps

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Comment by: - 2006-11-06 13:36
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Very New Orleans, surely? I picture dark streets and neon lights, and for some reason I keep seeing Humphrey Bogart... I like this piece, Johnny.
Comment by: - 2006-11-06 13:35
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good and simplistic. love it.
diyanimal Comment by: diyanimal - 2006-11-06 12:51
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nice - makes me think of rain (don't ask me why).
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