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| This is really interesting. The form and the beat are something you don't see everyday. A refreshing type of piece. Well done! |
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| I actually enjoyed this observation. I mean, this has happened so frequently that I think we all wonder at one point or another what this is - that one beautiful moment can be forced into ugliness by ignorance. The poem could not survive without the ending because it is the whole point of it. :o) like! |
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| Lets not be afraid to observe, express, and analyze the truths of our world. This is not a controversial poem, it's the truth of what is around us all day everyday. |
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| just so there is no misunderstanding, this poem is nothing but an observation made while I was sitting outside a coffee shop. This situation actually happened. The gay bar line wasn't meant for shock value, it was actually said by 2 guys and I was expressing how weird the world is and how I can observe something beautiful and instantly observe something ugly. |
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| I actually thought of this of being funny. I laughed while reading this. I liked it. |
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