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tathas
Joseph Hurley
United States, TX, Conroe

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A Crimson Throne

Cold corpse on a crimson throne
Staring eyeless at the ashes of ambition
The remains of the court of desire

A kingdom won through blood
And deepest treachery
Sown the seeds for discontent

Old friend, his sword
Hangs useless on the wall above
As rusted as his crown

It could not save him
When the blow finally came
Darkness called its mark

No more dances
No more balls
Only the rattle of bones

No prophecy called his hand
Only desire and ambition
A need to rule

And now, it has come
To nothing but a tomb
Where once red glory shown

Hatred had stirred
Its quiet head
In little whispers

For what desire took
Desire can take again
In similar hearts

And here, the tragedy
The loss of all dreams
Come to ruin and ash

None survived that night
When summoned darkness
Took more than was asked

A crimson bargain
Backed by a smiling lie
Let doom in through the front door

So much pain and fear
When the final guest arrived
Wearing its hideous face

Some were valiant
And fought to the death
Which came all too quickly

Some were cowards
And tried to run and hide
But there was no escape

For what desire had called
Drew them all to its breast
And drank deep

And now, it is all just ashes
And a crimson throne
With a corpse king

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ticra Comment by: ticra - 2006-11-27 10:51
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wow. that was truly amazing. I really liked the conflicting ideas in this like the dances (where you think of music) vs the rattle of bones. I thought the end was increadable. a corpes king, wow.
amazing!
mleder2005 Comment by: mleder2005 - 2006-11-09 19:51
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Great work, the language and flow was perfect. Desire makes you blind to everything else, very Dark Towerish, great work.
Teri Comment by: Teri - 2006-11-09 08:41
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I could compare this to about seven different scenarios, which means all who read should be able to relate. If not, I want to live over the rainbow where they do. :)

I kept thinking of the MOVIE "Bram Stoker's Dracula". How everything seems to hinge on love and desire (look at most of the poetry that's written) and the effects of when it goes wrong.

Great piece, Joseph. Do it again! :)

T. xoxox
LadyEgyptia Comment by: LadyEgyptia - 2006-11-08 14:54
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Oooooooo, really got a chill out of this one. Mighty fine work, my friend!
Comment by: - 2006-11-08 11:21
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Death comes knocking... excellent, Joseph.
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