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A Crimson Throne
Cold corpse on a crimson throne
Staring eyeless at the ashes of ambition
The remains of the court of desire
A kingdom won through blood
And deepest treachery
Sown the seeds for discontent
Old friend, his sword
Hangs useless on the wall above
As rusted as his crown
It could not save him
When the blow finally came
Darkness called its mark
No more dances
No more balls
Only the rattle of bones
No prophecy called his hand
Only desire and ambition
A need to rule
And now, it has come
To nothing but a tomb
Where once red glory shown
Hatred had stirred
Its quiet head
In little whispers
For what desire took
Desire can take again
In similar hearts
And here, the tragedy
The loss of all dreams
Come to ruin and ash
None survived that night
When summoned darkness
Took more than was asked
A crimson bargain
Backed by a smiling lie
Let doom in through the front door
So much pain and fear
When the final guest arrived
Wearing its hideous face
Some were valiant
And fought to the death
Which came all too quickly
Some were cowards
And tried to run and hide
But there was no escape
For what desire had called
Drew them all to its breast
And drank deep
And now, it is all just ashes
And a crimson throne
With a corpse king
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Comment by: ticra - 2006-11-27 10:51
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wow. that was truly amazing. I really liked the conflicting ideas in this like the dances (where you think of music) vs the rattle of bones. I thought the end was increadable. a corpes king, wow.
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| Great work, the language and flow was perfect. Desire makes you blind to everything else, very Dark Towerish, great work. |
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Comment by: Teri - 2006-11-09 08:41
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I could compare this to about seven different scenarios, which means all who read should be able to relate. If not, I want to live over the rainbow where they do. :)
I kept thinking of the MOVIE "Bram Stoker's Dracula". How everything seems to hinge on love and desire (look at most of the poetry that's written) and the effects of when it goes wrong.
Great piece, Joseph. Do it again! :)
T. xoxox |
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| Oooooooo, really got a chill out of this one. Mighty fine work, my friend! |
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Comment by: - 2006-11-08 11:21
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| Death comes knocking... excellent, Joseph. |
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