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A Poem For You

So scarily petite and unadorned to the eye
For something so powerful. Dominant
And unnaturally controlling. Though I try,
I am bound by It's authority over me.

One taste is never enough to satisfy ones
Craving. Dependent is the word that comes to mind.
Hooked, weak, needy. Descriptive words for our connection.
Addicted to this dirty relationship.

Emotional, mental and physical reactions,
Stimulate my body, my pleasure zones tingle.
Release me, take away this horrific stress. My partner
I'm so grateful for our moments alone.

My moments with you are passionate but soon
You will no longer want me. Some insects kill there partners,
You know. I'm sure you would tell me you love me if you spoke.
Maybe I would reply the same.

People say I should leave you, but I don't think I could
Deal with such a decision. Your taste, your smell,
The way you feel in my hand. Your warmth, gliding up my fingers.
Surely I'd be a fool to give you up?

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coolwriter Comment by: coolwriter - 2006-04-25 17:28
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i really enjoyed reading this...
abbye
Scarlet Shimmer Comment by: Scarlet Shimmer - 2006-01-25 13:48
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It sounds like its some sort of obsession that maybe someone might now know about? My favourite line is "Hooked, weak, needy. Desccriptive words for our connection." I really like this piece, Good work
Comment by: - 2006-01-10 08:49
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Nicely describes the dependancy a person can feel to another and the release pleasure can bring.
keep writing!
xxx
PS. i cant e-mail out
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