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joshcupp
Josh Cupp
United States, florida, winter park

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It's All About Mary

In the park is where Mary is at
She went with her named big brother matt
Her brother let her go play on the swings
as he goes to the store to get some things
she would play with some kids on the slides
today they decided to play hide and go seek
Mary your it, go count, dont peek
she counts to twenty and goes on her way
she looks all around and there she see's ray
she chases im all around the sand box
and tags him by the counting rocks
Ray's it, I got him, come out and rehide
Mary saw a bathroom to hide so she ran inside
she hide inside a porta potty as she gags from the smell
But she doesnt realize, this could forever be her cell
So inside the john this spider
It was sitting beside her
It was the black widow herself
Mary thought she was by herself
It cralwed up her boot to her knee cap
She had an itch, and it went splat
I bet you thought she was gonna die
Instead the spider went bye-bye

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Comment by: - 2006-11-10 02:22
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Excellent, Josh. I love the twist at the end, it really caught me out.
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