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ShatteredDreamer
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United Kingdom

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You Messed Up My Manolos, Why Do The Same To My Uggs?

Thought that you would understand,
There were a lot of things we left unsaid,
Balled up and crushed like gum wrappers amongst a choir of deadened stars,
(stuffed like yesterday's furballs, under the bed)
Littered in between the sidewalk gutters,
Skinny drainpipes absorb a sunless sky's fouled light,
Scuffing the gum wrappers in the rubble of yesterdays trashed love.
I cut the thread, but didn't have the eye to get it through the needle,
Could never stitch up the blackened remains of your tattered heart,
Although I still find black paint under my fingernails
(Rocking back and forth on my knees)
And have to go and vomit in the toilet for remembering the bodies I crushed under my feet.
Linen shirts can't take a spillage of ketchup or mustard,
But the shirt I wore for Monday morning could take the meaty smell of your blood
As you dripped at my feet I scowled
Shit!
(Shit!)
You ruined my heels, and I had to bin my boots already,
After I couldn't get all the gum
(all your love)
off the soles
No matter how hard I stomped and staggered and heaved
(dry heaved, dry heaved)
Stuck like a splinter deep in my tender feet,
(Injecting Cupid's venom)
So I left you to bleed all over the café floor, and I spilled my coffee into the muck
Ordered a muffin to go,
Walked away into the dusty moonlight,
Never again to see you and your trashed love.

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xxsasha1xx Comment by: xxsasha1xx - 2007-03-28 13:39
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Wow this is gritty but i love it. "I cut the thread but didnt have the eye to get it thru the needle."That's a hot line. This would be great as a spoken piece. (great) Great!
SpadedHeart Comment by: SpadedHeart - 2007-03-22 09:39
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I don't know for sure, but I think its pure genuis like you.
Injected with cupid venom ...grins ..
simowierdo Comment by: simowierdo - 2007-03-13 16:01
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for some strange reason, the whole time i'm reading this, my mind formed the image of a street from New York City...strange...i liked how you compared the gum on your soles to your love. i thought it was very original : )
sabihah Comment by: sabihah Online- 2007-03-12 23:59
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Great imagery and I love the blatant anger this poem portrays, another great write thanx for sharing
Beck Comment by: Beck Online- 2007-03-11 14:46
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I had to read this a few times (a good thing) it has an odd combination that runs through the poem of an almost inconvenient guilt paired with no feeling of regret, devoid of sympathy. It's ruthless and really well written.
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