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jessishere
jessica wolsiefer
United States

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I am a fool

I am a fool to think
that I'd always be with you.
I am a fool to think
that our love was true.
I am a fool to think
we would always be together
I am a fool to think
you'd love me forever
I am a fool to think
we could work this out
I am a fool to think
we could overcome what this is about
I am a fool to think
that we were meant for each other
I am a fool to think
I'd never want any other
I am a fool to think
we could overcome it all
I am a fool to think
we would never fall
I am a fool to think
I'd be your wife
I am a fool to think
I'd always be apart of your life
I am a fool to think
we would have a future
I am a fool to think
the feelings were mutal
I am a fool to think
this would never happen to me
I am a fool to think
that love doesnt come without a fee

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Comment by: - 2006-11-12 11:44
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Another good poem, Jessica. The last line is the best - as it should be in all good poems.
inviscera Comment by: inviscera - 2006-11-11 13:20
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The lack of punctuation in this piece makes it seem like a genuine outpouring of the "got to say it or I'll burst" variety. Nice one.
desperado Comment by: desperado - 2006-11-11 12:21
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this is excellent the words you have chosen and what you are saying are so right, thats what i have been thinking about my partner thank you
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