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Sunday, November 12th, 2006
It's Not Too Late, Current Mood: Drained
It's not too late
To save
The world
To realize
The world
To give up
The mission
To save
The world
To finish
The actual
To deplete
The resources
To balance
The cycle
To preserve
The nature
To continue
The instinct
To love
The living
To kill
The living
To make room
The population
To give birth
The virus
To work
The purpose
To obsess
The visions
To live
The illusions
To complete
The universe
It's not too late
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I have a few pieces written in a similar style and find it very cathartic. When my mind races, this is the quickest way to write (and edit). It also allows for special attention in word choice. Your ideas here are so clear and concise, I was almost saddened to reach the end. I'll be back often.
