I am become Shiva, destroyer of worlds
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I am become Shiva, destroyer of worlds
you stand before me
naked
and with a casual ease
you reach down
and swing your ribcage open
revealing your shining heart
within
i reach for it
but just before taking it
i pause
my fingertips lightly grazing the surface
i feel
an amplifier hum,
a harmonic resonance,
and the bass beat of life
but then
dark clouds swirl around you
torrents of rain
spilling down your face
you cry
of abuse, of pain, of a thousand dark events
i still stand frozen
my hand touching your heart
the dark clouds thicken
obscuring your face
i should embrace you
help you keep the darkness at bay
but the intensity
of inky blackness
makes me afraid
i stumble backward
and trip
"i'm sorry," i cry, crawling backwards,
away
but my apology for weakness
only thickens the clouds
it is then i look down
and see
to my dismay
that i am holding your heart
in my hand
and i don't know how
to give it back
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| Title is perfect. |
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Comment by: jkaber - 2006-11-13 15:56
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| Wow! Nice one. |
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Comment by: - 2006-11-13 12:32
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| This is a unique take on the theme of a despondent lover and a stormy relationship, Tev. Great stuff. |
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Comment by: mitra - 2006-11-13 08:14
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The contents has good imaginary. Almost like a failing hero.
I not sure about the title though. |
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