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The Silhun
Salahuddin Jitmoud
United States, Kentucky, Lexington

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The Man of Peace

He is the last prophet sent by God.
Some say he is a fraud.
But he was sent to spread peace,
And if not done, he would not cease.
Some went with him and embraced his religion,
But others did not and that is a rueful decision.
Allah is the judge but they still may go to Hell,
For they followed the devil and their soul did they sell.
Their skin will be burned away by the fire,
And come again but be burned once more and this system will never tire.
If you do not want this to happen to you,
Follow Muhammad (s) and it is clear this you will not rue.
Do not be like the ones that threw stones at the man,
Who when protecting his religion never ran.
For Allah's sake he would bleed from head to toe.
A man like this can never be anyone's great foe.
Allah sent the Qur'an down to this great man,
And read it everyday, if you can.
For this is the guide to success in life,
Not, as some may say, a guide to use a gun and a knife.
Read the Qur'an and see for yourself,
Or do you fear you will turn out to be wrong in front of everybody else.
You will also see that the Qur'an has no mistake,
For it was written by the one and only god whose power is surely not fake.
Muhammad (s) memorized the Qur'an,
And taught it to his fellow companions to be memorized for an eon.
You should follow the man that was just described,
Known as Prophet Muhammad (s), the man who never lied.

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The Silhun Comment by: The Silhun - 2007-07-04 15:40
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ok, i'll make a poem about Allah
goodmoses Comment by: goodmoses - 2007-07-04 05:31
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A poem with such a message has no possibility of not being beautiful. You chose great words to convey your thoughts. But of course, such a man deserves such words. You should write another poem about Allah, using even greater words and making it even more powerful, because Prophet Muhammad, upon whom may Allah give peace, would be nothing without Allah.

I think you can improve this poem by shortening the longer lines so that the rhythm doesn't falter. It just needs a little smoothing out.
Boonrassi Comment by: Boonrassi - 2007-07-03 20:49
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And taught it to his fellow companions to be memorized for an eon.

//intense writing, good job.

Known as Prophet Muhammad (s), the man who never lied.

//cool..
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The Silhun Comment by: The Silhun - 2007-06-23 22:03
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thanx! ^^
uqbahTC1 Comment by: uqbahTC1 - 2007-06-23 22:00
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this is awesome man. I love it ^^
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