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| thanks for the comments. i already got used to "fallen tree", maybe i'll change it when i find the right word...thanks again |
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Comment by: PANDORA - 2007-04-02 12:35
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Fallen from a fallen tree
--I think this line could be stronger without repeating the word "fallen"
Maybe
Fallen from a fatal tree or Fallen from a wasted tree
--something like that--
I like how you have really detailed that one leaf so that a picture is seen in the readers mind.** |
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Comment by: sudipal - 2007-02-26 13:52
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| This is very pretty with a lot of feeling. Nice. |
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Comment by: Anne - 2007-02-16 07:26
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| lovely . nice words. such a lonely leaf |
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Comment by: Jewels - 2006-11-29 18:42
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| Honest and it has a kind of pure feel about it. |
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