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Bipolaris
Wayne Crans
United States, ID, Boise

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Two People

Wednesday, November 15th, 2006
Two People, Current Mood: Anxious

Two People
One weak
One strong
One suffering
One ignoring
One filled with anxiety
One filled with determination
One hates the other
One admires the other
One can't live without the other
One can't wait to be without
One needs medication
One doesn't
One brings the other down
One causes the other to feel embarrassed
One has been living with the other since birth
One has denied the others existance since birth
One feels he can't move forward with the other
One feels the same
One is artistic and intelligent
One has no creativity or thought and can barely leave the couch
One is sick of this
One thrives from this
One looks in the mirror and sees the other
One world
One fight
One mind
Two people

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EnigmaticSoul Comment by: EnigmaticSoul - 2007-04-22 18:59
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I love this. I enjoyed the contrasts within your poem, and to be honest, I could pretty much relate to the majority of it.
DickGentile Comment by: DickGentile - 2007-03-10 00:27
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Right On... great poem.
diyanimal Comment by: diyanimal - 2006-11-16 06:07
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incredibly insightful; nothing like a good go 'round of codependency. :o( great write
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