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jessishere
jessica wolsiefer
United States

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Betrayal

Again, and again I took you back.
Again, and again you went behind my back.
What am I suppose to do?
I can't just forget you.
I thought what you said was true,
but you made me look like a fool.
You betrayed me time after time agian.
I want to trust you, but I don't know how or when.
You say you love me with all your heart,
but then you go and tear it all apart.
Why can't you stop the lies?
And maybe I can stop all the who, what, were, and whys.
I thought you would do anything for me,
this isn't what I wanted; can't you see?
I don't want to forgive you,
but I don't want to lose you.
Why are you making it so hard?
We've come so far.
Please stop the betrayal,.
and lets not let our relationship fail

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meatloaf Comment by: meatloaf - 2006-12-28 08:59
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i feel the confusion, the contradiction. Nice.
noodel Comment by: noodel - 2006-11-17 18:50
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dump his ass. nice work. keep at it. READ READ READ WRITE WRITE WRITE... then read some more!!! just KEEP AT IT.
Comment by: - 2006-11-16 08:28
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that works talking to a b/f or a other friend or a relative..very nicely done how you can talk to all thsoe things all at once in a concise fashion..nicely done..thanks for sharing
Comment by: - 2006-11-15 23:56
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You tell him, Jessica. He's an ungrateful swine.
Stirring stuff. If this doesn't stir him out of his lying, cheating ways, show him the door.
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